Antonus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mana Guard Pilot (Old)]

Points for trying. I highly recommend looking into studying some basic human anatomy and purchase a better recording device. Otherwise I don't think you should get discouraged you've shown some storytelling potential here. Work with it.

Mdoganima responds:

Thanks for the review. Anatomy is one thing I have the most trouble with I think xD. When it comes to a recording device I have a better one already this was done when I recorded with my laptop mic. My other videos are much better I'd like to think.