It's got a really nice start. I like that your game actually functions which is obviously important. I think you have an idea going here but it needs a lot of development. Mainly speaking from a designer standpoint, the levels are a bit too slow and strenuous and I don't think it's wise to kill the player upon hitting the wall; It leads for unnecessary backtracking. I suggest adding some more hazards like lava pits and spikes. I would love to see some AI work however I know how painful that can be to program. Overall it's better than anything I could ever do. So kudos!
I'm giving you stars for potential. It's a pretty broken game to say the least. Also all of your static images are terribly pixelated and that's a really basic thing to watch for aesthetically speaking, This game wouldn't be so bad if it actually functions properly. Slow down the speed and you might have a solid piece.
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